Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
I really like your 24 hour footprint.and how much effort you have put into it. I like how you have put a video in to your slide. Maybe you could make the writing bigger next time. overall i really like your work. bye
Kia ora Castiel, My name is Mariam from Room 8, WOW!.I really love the way you gave specifically wrote your sentence! From my look's you took a long time to do this right? The next step for you is that you should proper sentence and make you writing bigger. BLOG YOU LATER-Mariam
Kia ora my name is liberty and I am in R8.
ReplyDeleteI really like your 24 hour footprint.and how much effort
you have put into it. I like how you have put a video in to your slide.
Maybe you could make the writing bigger next time.
overall i really like your work.
bye
Thank you Liberty for your helpful comment. When i do another one similar to this i will do what you have recomended. Blog you later!.
DeleteKia ora Castiel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mariam from Room 8,
WOW!.I really love the way you gave specifically wrote your sentence!
From my look's you took a long time to do this right?
The next step for you is that you should proper sentence and make you writing bigger.
BLOG YOU LATER-Mariam
Kia ora Castiel great job with your 24 hour footprint
ReplyDeletehow long did it take?
blog you later
Oliver
Hello Oliver,
DeleteI think it took like two days to do this because I was starting off slow.